1. Agent Undis Closed of the aforementioned Radio Nutmeg strongly implies that his station is illicit (I think his introduction starts with 'Somewhere in the mountains of New Caledonia'). I've always imagined him and Gilty Cin (I think that's right - can't get to the Wiki right now) hacking their way into a network they're probably not meant to be on. By this theory, unless it had been modified, a console probably /wouldn't/ pick up Radio Caroline or whatever. As to whether a normal radio would pick anything up in HQ... that would depend on the radio-transparency of generic surface, and the universe the radio was in at the time (assuming the HQ-is-built-into-caves-via-invisible-portals theory is correct, I don't think it's ever been properly tested).
   
   3. Switching tracks, I would say this depends entirely on what works in the story. If you'd literally just have to write 'Agents Carbuncle and Vermillion portalled into Bitticus Karaktor's room. Vermillion stabbed him. They portalled out', it's probably not worth bothering. If, however, the off-screen character is the President of the United States of Valinor, with armies at his disposal, it might be hilarious to watch, and so worth doing.
   
   (United States of Valinor... oh dear. That's almost as bad as 'and then the Noldor invaded Modern Earth and totally won')
   
   hS

As far as I know, there are no Primeval Minis, but I think Mini Future Predators would probably be the best choice. Just in my opinion.

[Snort] Vëon... 'Manly Man'? Oh, very good. The primary problem with this name is that it's very good Quenya - but most elves outside Valinor would have a Sindarin name.

Q. Vëa doesn't seem to have an attested S. form, but by analogy with Q. Valar > S. Balan, I'd say it's likely to be S. Bea. So you could have Beon (the umlauts on the 'e' aren't used in Sindarin writing). This is supported by the fact that Q. Ve, 'as, like' > S. Be. I can't find anything else that would clash with it, so Beon would work - both (probably) by meaning, and as the closest Sindarin phonology will allow to Veon (and as a bonus, with a definite article he would become i Veon, 'the Beon' - this also works for many prepositions, so 'with Beon' would be na Veon).

hS, knows too much

The Wiki is your friend!

We have the PPC Radio:
http://ppc.wikia.com/wiki/PPCRadio
run by Agent Gilty Cin.

There's also Radio Nutmeg:
<a href="http://ppc.wikia.com/wiki/RadioNutmeg">http://ppc.wikia.com/wiki/Radio_Nutmeg
which has actual real broadcasts that can be listened to! This one is run by Agent Undis Closed, who, entirely through coincidence, sounds exactly like Huinesoron.

Let's see, what else. I would say a character only needs to be neuralyzed if they observed part of the badfic happening, but I'm sure there are exceptions. An example would be nice, here.

A missing comma? I'm thinking no. That wouldn't be affecting the name. A missing apostrophe, like in "Aragorns sword?" Definitely a mini. (and maybe duplicate Aragorns, too!) A random extra comma, like in "walking to the door ,Aragorn saw . . . ?" Also a mini, though I'm not sure how to pronounce the comma in ,Aragorn. Maybe start with a pause?

Minis are created from mis-spelt names. If there's a missing comma... I think we'd need an example just to be sure.

I'm not sure about the rest though, hehe...