Subject: I'll be over there whimpering in pain.
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Posted on: 2012-07-18 07:14:00 UTC

Why-hy-hyyyyyyy...

I mean seriously, what is even the point of making Scootaloo's mother an abusive alcoholic. It inserts grimdark for no reason, creates angst for angst's sake, and it's not even well-written! Ugh, it's in a kid's point of view and it doesn't sound like a kid, it's got too many formal words like 'assailant' and it isn't Scootaloo, that's the major thing because 'assailant' could be in a kid's vocabulary (coughprobablytwilightsparkleasafillycough) but this, this isn't Scootaloo.

Ow, ow, ow, Celestia this thing hurts, no self you haven't even got Permission and your schoolwork situation is in a place where you know full well it takes precedence over Fun, you cannot take a titanium spork to it! But Glod, Glod do I want to.

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