Subject: That is beautiful.
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Posted on: 2012-06-01 21:39:00 UTC
One of the many, MANY reasons I loathe those books is exactly that sort of thing- the author seems to have just thrown in stuff that looks cool without thinking about it at all. I know that some of those rivers bothered me even when I first read it (and I was, what, 12?).
Re: fanart stuff: there are certainly some fancomics and the like that are bad enough to warrant a PPCing, like "How I Became Yours," and I'd love to see those get sporked. My suggestion style-wise would be a mix of formats- text narration mixed in with pictures like hS described for when specific visual aspects need to be brought up, sorta like how a normal mission quotes lines from the fic.