First off, I liked this piece.

Nita is really having a hard time adjusting to life outside the DIO, which is to be expected. I really feel for her. Everything and everyone she knew is gone, and Upstairs didn't even have the decency to wipe her memory. Can't blame her for seeking out some solitude.

The Spirit of the PPC sure does like the titles, huh?

I liked the treatment of the doors in the hallway. It is so rarely mentioned anymore that the halls and doors like to mess with people. There is a lot of fun to be had with that, and it is good to see.

It occurs to me that the Spirit of Imagination, in this piece, is somewhat lacking in imagination. She does the same thing over and over again? That spirit needs to get out more (taken care of in the end, of course).

Nita is very genre savvy. It is good to see someone thinking about these things before setting off on a quest. I enjoyed her explanation of how such a quest would go, and the reactions of the Spirit when confronted with it.

Loved the inclusion of the third spirit. I approve.

Overall, well done. It had a serious tone, but there were enough moments of humor to lighten it up.

-Phobos

Still, I couldn't find the mass grave. But maybe it's better that way.

Nice places, those are not, young PPCer.