Subject: Thoughts. :)
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Posted on: 2012-05-14 08:57:00 UTC

I'm honestly not sure where I stand with this, plotwise. It's definitely very dark, That's definitely no bad thing, but It just doesn't feel right, In my opinion.

Other than that though, It was an excellent piece of writing, and the Jaycacia Thornbyrd Cameo/thing made me chuckle. I didn't notice any SPaG errors, but I wasn't really looking. :/

I guess all I can really say is, It's a great piece of writing, whether I like the plot or not, It was still fun to read. I can't wait til you write more. :)

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