Requesting critique (Doctor Who)

Subject: Requesting critique (Doctor Who)
Author: TheScribe
Posted on: 2012-03-28 16:55:00 UTC

Yo! I wrote this on a whim in, like, half an hour.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7965951/1/HeatHaze_Days

I am requesting critique for it. Obviously. Derp. (I'm extremely tired today and can't really think.) But yeah, critique would be nice, as would sleep. Sleep is cool...

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Requesting critique (Doctor Who) by TheScribe on 2012-03-28 16:55:00 UTC

C'mon, I don't bite! by TheScribe on 2012-03-29 14:39:00 UTC Reply

... mostly.

*lures with cookies*

I would critique it, by melancholicPoet on 2012-03-29 18:04:00 UTC Reply

but words escape me. I'm hard to impress, but I'm also hard to disappoint, and this fell squarely in the "It was good and well written, but nothing to rave about" range. The connection you made with Heat Haze Days was astounding though. To the point where again, there's nothing I can think of to say orz.

I am not very good at this. Sorry.