Subject: I would critique it,
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Posted on: 2012-03-29 18:04:00 UTC
but words escape me. I'm hard to impress, but I'm also hard to disappoint, and this fell squarely in the "It was good and well written, but nothing to rave about" range. The connection you made with Heat Haze Days was astounding though. To the point where again, there's nothing I can think of to say orz.
I am not very good at this. Sorry.
Yo! I wrote this on a whim in, like, half an hour.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7965951/1/HeatHaze_Days
I am requesting critique for it. Obviously. Derp. (I'm extremely tired today and can't really think.) But yeah, critique would be nice, as would sleep. Sleep is cool...
... mostly.
*lures with cookies*
but words escape me. I'm hard to impress, but I'm also hard to disappoint, and this fell squarely in the "It was good and well written, but nothing to rave about" range. The connection you made with Heat Haze Days was astounding though. To the point where again, there's nothing I can think of to say orz.
I am not very good at this. Sorry.