Nice Mission, was fun to read. Sorry for the delay, had too much going on at once...

"I like I'm in in a cheap romantic'

I /feel/ that there might be a word missing. :P

In the future, maybe show a bit more fic bits, or more of an explanation for scenes like the CAPS LOCK OF RAGE. It sorta came out of the blue, with no reason I could see and was kinda jarring.

Oooh, and the hook at the end was a nice touch. Now I am interested to see his Deep, Dark, Secret.

It was entertaining and fun and groovy! Enter-un-roovy!

I know of Stargate, but I *loved* the line about normal healthy relationships being slow.

Also, what? They hid in a wardrobe and there were no Narnia jokes? :D

A) I see a cliffie!

B) Garçcon ought to be garçon, I think.

C) This is the first SG•1 sporking I've read.

D) That allcaps rage was weird.

E) Poor Daniel.

F) I like lists.