Subject: That darn sentence.
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Posted on: 2012-02-23 15:48:00 UTC
No matter how much I correct it, somehow it alway managed to get away.
If you mean the in-fic CAPS LOCK OF RAGE (TM), there was nothing. Between the two quotes, there was literally just Daniel calling her clumsy.
Okay, this thing's been lying around a bit, but yeah, I'm posting this now.
Bugs, typos, other stuff that slipped through the net, please report them.
Mission (kind of NSFW?)
Also, a mini-Unas: Share. I'm not sure if I'll keep her, especially if she discovers filesharing and goes rampant with it.
Nice Mission, was fun to read. Sorry for the delay, had too much going on at once...
"I like I'm in in a cheap romantic'
I /feel/ that there might be a word missing. :P
In the future, maybe show a bit more fic bits, or more of an explanation for scenes like the CAPS LOCK OF RAGE. It sorta came out of the blue, with no reason I could see and was kinda jarring.
Oooh, and the hook at the end was a nice touch. Now I am interested to see his Deep, Dark, Secret.
No matter how much I correct it, somehow it alway managed to get away.
If you mean the in-fic CAPS LOCK OF RAGE (TM), there was nothing. Between the two quotes, there was literally just Daniel calling her clumsy.
It was entertaining and fun and groovy! Enter-un-roovy!
I know of Stargate, but I *loved* the line about normal healthy relationships being slow.
Also, what? They hid in a wardrobe and there were no Narnia jokes? :D
A) I see a cliffie!
B) Garçcon ought to be garçon, I think.
C) This is the first SG•1 sporking I've read.
D) That allcaps rage was weird.
E) Poor Daniel.
F) I like lists.
There are a bunch more SG-1 sporkings around. Also, Atlantis sporkings.
Well, I did, but I only saw the season 2 first episode.