I have just finished the first draft of my Nanoha mission, 'Overpowered and the Triggerhappy.' If you all could check for SPaG, plotholes, and suchlike, that'd be great.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZSWVVKRXDY0rrqKH2OzJKhzTC9Y4jsgqp59oZcm5f38/edit?hl=enUS

<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHisiZAyPVFIOZ8znSG4Y1oEal405TVnJhL75abStQ/edit?hl=enUS">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHisiZAyPVFIOZ8znSG4Y1oEal405TVnJhL75abStQ/edit?hl=enUS

For the curious, the fanfic is here:
<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4828586/1/AnimistandtheAnarchist">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4828586/1/Animistandthe_Anarchist