Subject: I'll put an eye on it.
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Posted on: 2012-01-24 16:44:00 UTC
I'm not exactly good for SPaG (I'm Italian, so English isn't exactly my native language), but I'll check about mission flow, plotholes and canon.
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Betas Wanted by
on 2012-01-24 00:10:00 UTC
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I have just finished the first draft of my Nanoha mission, 'Overpowered and the Triggerhappy.' If you all could check for SPaG, plotholes, and suchlike, that'd be great.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZSWVVKRXDY0rrqKH2OzJKhzTC9Y4jsgqp59oZcm5f38/edit?hl=enUS
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHisiZAyPVFIOZ8znSG4Y1oEal405TVnJhL75abStQ/edit?hl=enUS">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHisiZAyPVFIOZ8znSG4Y1oEal405TVnJhL75abStQ/edit?hl=enUS
For the curious, the fanfic is here:
<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4828586/1/AnimistandtheAnarchist">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4828586/1/Animistandthe_Anarchist -
I'll put an eye on it. by
on 2012-01-24 16:44:00 UTC
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I'm not exactly good for SPaG (I'm Italian, so English isn't exactly my native language), but I'll check about mission flow, plotholes and canon.
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Left two more comments on it (nm) by
on 2012-01-24 18:40:00 UTC
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