Subject: O hai there!
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Posted on: 2013-06-04 17:15:00 UTC
First of all, welcome back to the Board - if you're staying. If not, I'm glad you stopped by!
You see, I've really enjoyed Teek and Crelmos's missions - in fact, they're some of my favorites. I think their interaction is interesting and played very well - Crelmos is creepy enough to infuriate Teek, but not creepy enough to make the story unfunny. I like how in their first mission, it's an incredibly boring, clichéd Sue, which lets Teek and Crelmos shine. I keep trying to imagine a Cardassian hobbit, and it cracks me up every time. However, I'm especially fond of the mission with the horse goddess - the way you thoroughly deconstructed the stupidity of the original fic was wonderful, and I like Teek's speculations about a good story with a lust curse. It might be a plot bunny. And like I said, Crelmos is just the right amount of evil and creepy to make Teek angry, but not so much as to change the story's tone into anything other than humorous. And that is exemplified in the disguise generator trick he pulls on her.
I think the third mission's greatest strength is simply how mind-bogglingly stupid the original fic is, and how Teek and Crelmos are just trying to deal with it. If the results of Crelmos's "experiment" at the end, and Teek's reaction to said experiment is ever written, I will read it.
In fact, if you ever write any more missions involving Teek and Crelmos as partners, or with Crelmos, I will read them. I confess, I haven't read any more of Teek's missions because I read those when scouring the wiki for Star Trek stuff.
Long story short, you have a fan.