Subject: New Mission! Warehouse 13, DMS
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Posted on: 2012-01-12 01:31:00 UTC
So this is the first Warehouse 13 mission ever, which is cool. It includes the first ever Warehouse 13 mini, a mini-Farnsworth named Claudi.
This is also the tenth mission that I have written or collabed on. So that's cool, too.
You can find it here!
"A Warehouse 13 Sue who loves the color yellow a bit too much annoys Agents Thomas and Orken in 'Government Training'."
Sorry it took so long to get to it! Greta mission, I really like all the wacky happenings made by the misspellings. the 'ford', Government Training, and the eyeballs! ^_^
It's so much more fun when you can play around with misspellings, isn't it?
It also struck me as odd that most of the misspellings were in the same two paragraphs. The rest was pretty good.
For some reason, I'm getting a heavy "low man" vibe from this Sue. She dresses in garishly colored clothing, and her car is part of "the Black." She's a picture perfect member of the low men in yellow coats from the Stephen Kingverse.
Also, a note from the Department of Redundancy Department, concerning a particular sentence near the end of your mission:
"Even though it did not have arms to cross, the mini-Farnsworth did not have arms to cross, still gave the impression of haughty disdain . . ."
I did not really think about that. But now that you mention it... *shudders* Perhaps all Sues are related to low men?
Disregard. Firebird already pointed out that sentence! I should have refreshed.
I did notice something odd near the end of the mission, though. The following sentence has a repetition in it:
"Even though it did not have arms to cross, the mini-Farnsworth did not have arms to cross, still gave the impression of haughty disdain for the idea of placing friends before chocolate."
Thank you! I've got a prospective Warehouse 13/Harry Potter crossover I want to tackle in the near future, and since it had minis I was hoping when you posted the mission that you'd make them Farnsworths!
Okay, aside from that...
This was a fun mission. You really got Pete incredibly IC there, the Sue was really bad, the typos produced hilarious results, and it was overall a very entertaining mission.
=D