Subject: Re: Re: Mission
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Posted on: 2012-01-13 00:38:00 UTC
Disregard. Firebird already pointed out that sentence! I should have refreshed.
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New Mission! Warehouse 13, DMS by
on 2012-01-12 01:31:00 UTC
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So this is the first Warehouse 13 mission ever, which is cool. It includes the first ever Warehouse 13 mini, a mini-Farnsworth named Claudi.
This is also the tenth mission that I have written or collabed on. So that's cool, too.
You can find it here!
"A Warehouse 13 Sue who loves the color yellow a bit too much annoys Agents Thomas and Orken in 'Government Training'." -
Hh, nice! by
on 2012-01-18 08:21:00 UTC
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Sorry it took so long to get to it! Greta mission, I really like all the wacky happenings made by the misspellings. the 'ford', Government Training, and the eyeballs! ^_^
It's so much more fun when you can play around with misspellings, isn't it? -
Indeed! by
on 2012-01-18 19:19:00 UTC
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It also struck me as odd that most of the misspellings were in the same two paragraphs. The rest was pretty good.
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Re: Mission by
on 2012-01-13 00:37:00 UTC
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For some reason, I'm getting a heavy "low man" vibe from this Sue. She dresses in garishly colored clothing, and her car is part of "the Black." She's a picture perfect member of the low men in yellow coats from the Stephen Kingverse.
Also, a note from the Department of Redundancy Department, concerning a particular sentence near the end of your mission:
"Even though it did not have arms to cross, the mini-Farnsworth did not have arms to cross, still gave the impression of haughty disdain . . ." -
Huh. by
on 2012-01-13 22:33:00 UTC
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I did not really think about that. But now that you mention it... *shudders* Perhaps all Sues are related to low men?
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Re: Re: Mission by
on 2012-01-13 00:38:00 UTC
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Disregard. Firebird already pointed out that sentence! I should have refreshed.
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I don't watch Warehouse 13 but I like this mission by
on 2012-01-12 21:09:00 UTC
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I did notice something odd near the end of the mission, though. The following sentence has a repetition in it:
"Even though it did not have arms to cross, the mini-Farnsworth did not have arms to cross, still gave the impression of haughty disdain for the idea of placing friends before chocolate." -
Yes! It's a Mini-Farnsworth! by
on 2012-01-12 03:35:00 UTC
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Thank you! I've got a prospective Warehouse 13/Harry Potter crossover I want to tackle in the near future, and since it had minis I was hoping when you posted the mission that you'd make them Farnsworths!
Okay, aside from that...
This was a fun mission. You really got Pete incredibly IC there, the Sue was really bad, the typos produced hilarious results, and it was overall a very entertaining mission.
=D