Subject: It could go either way ...
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Posted on: 2011-12-29 15:44:00 UTC

Handover in the fic sounds like someone got their messages crossed at HQ, but that would be believable. Alternately, the Intel agent could find out the fic is worse than the summary made it sound, and decide to call for an action team right now instead of filing a report.

Post-investigation handover would be written as a two-part mission. Part One, the Intel agent scouts the first few chapters of the fic; in Part Two the action team takes the Intel report (and any recommendations), goes through the later part of the fic to collect their own charges, and deals with the fic appropriately.

The reason I posted is because either I'm clueless or there's no action missions following up on Architeuthis' reports. His report is the mission. We can assume someone killed the Sues he reported on, but I was thinking about making the Intel-Action connection more obvious.

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