Subject: A job well done!
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Posted on: 2011-12-10 17:23:00 UTC
A most impressive mission, very well done and well written, and while I can't say I've read the fanfic it was about, I'm rather glad I haven't.
Subject: A job well done!
Author:
Posted on: 2011-12-10 17:23:00 UTC
A most impressive mission, very well done and well written, and while I can't say I've read the fanfic it was about, I'm rather glad I haven't.
Rather long, but very thorough. Only thing I can really complain about is 'woul' in place of 'would' when talking about the second "crowed". (“I don’t suppose you woul like several dozen more ‘gifts’ ”)
We need more drunk Cadmar, entire missions and interludes should feature a Cadmar who started drinking 2 hours before the beginning.
Do misspellings of races even spawn minis? I was under the impression it was mostly proper names and places (and sometimes bad punctuation).
More to the point, would "turin" be an ME mini or a kidnapped mini-Balrog?
The context made it clear that the author was referring to a 'turian', so it would be a Mass Effect mini.
And I imagine it would happen to race names as well: if it can happen with places, then it can most likely happen with races too.
A most impressive mission, very well done and well written, and while I can't say I've read the fanfic it was about, I'm rather glad I haven't.
You seem to be missing something. Like, say, beta credits. Just saying.
Yeah, I though of it as I was working today and kicked myself.