Subject: In regards to the paw issue...
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Posted on: 2011-11-26 13:21:00 UTC
Perhaps it's like in Redwall?
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Original fantasy plug by
on 2011-11-26 06:45:00 UTC
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I recently posted a chapter of my original story on DA, and I want feedback. So I thought, what better people to ask for advice on writing improvement than my fellow illustrious scholars of the PPC?
http://av-marten.deviantart.com/art/Shadowsage-Ch-1-270775430 -
I really liked it. by
on 2011-11-26 11:32:00 UTC
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About the only problem I had was that we don't get a good enough description of the Yatan to explain how feline creatures with paws can use swords and such, but given that such a description may have been forthcoming in another chapter, that may have been an invalid complaint. Otherwise, yeah, it's great.
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Thanks. by
on 2011-11-26 19:52:00 UTC
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That was one of the things I was a little worried about, but yes, in that character's next appearance I go into a little more detail describing her.
Thanks for commenting! -
In regards to the paw issue... by
on 2011-11-26 13:21:00 UTC
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Perhaps it's like in Redwall?