I got a little distracted in the last couple of pages before they decided to charge the Stus, but it was more because I don't know any of these fandoms. I was kind of getting worn out with the canon, while the agents were keeping my interest.

It is interesting how things kind of come in groups isn't it? I found a Lights Shawn and now there is a Light, which is very cool, because Lights Shawn can have a friend.

I loved how Anneli was the Innocents, and Emmeline's choice at the end was powerful.

Alex in particular was an annoying Stu, but I think that the thing that would have driven me up the wall the most about the fic was the baby talk! I don't even let my three year old use grammar as terrible as that dialogue! Really if a kid who is barely three can master saying, "He is..." "I am..." and "They are..." Then surely someone old enough to type (and spell pretty decently while doing it) is capable of mastering it.

Anyway! Well killed, Herr! I look forward to the next installment.

It's no secret that I'm a fan of long missions. And this was really good, with good pacing and all. I liked how the stupid just kept coming and coming.
And your agents are funny and wellwritten together.

'Twas a good mission, Herr Doktor. I applaud your stamina.

Loved the mission. On a side note, I saw a typo:

“Oh,” said Cindy, looking at the Stu as the scene began to form around them. “So it would be like a…” The witch grimaced. “No, that’s a really bad analogy.”

“What, like a house-elf being invited to Hogwarts?” asked Cindy.

The witch cringed, nodding. “Yes, that was the one,” she admitted, her gaze turning away from Xanthus. “I really shouldn’t have used that. House elves aren’t very fortunate in my continuum.”

Unless Cindy normally talks to herself...

On another note, if you don't mind, I'd rather like that omni-tool for my agents. Grace will wreak plenty of havoc with that.

It was really pretty long, but overall I thought it was great. Keep it up!