Subject: Nice mission!
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Posted on: 2011-09-22 22:41:00 UTC
Don't forget to post this to your LJ and/or link it on the wiki.
Subject: Nice mission!
Author:
Posted on: 2011-09-22 22:41:00 UTC
Don't forget to post this to your LJ and/or link it on the wiki.
WARNING: MAJOR PLOT CONTAINED WITHIN
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1r9EMI-1yTLcOIg4DZtQYw9992yhkCYeA2SO0bgZaQ9U
Christmas 2009; a day off proves disastrous not only for Fritz and Silas, but everyone around them as well--and the results may prove to be horrifying... and long-lasting.
Don't forget to post this to your LJ and/or link it on the wiki.
Though I don't have much to say other than that Fritz and Silas need lots and lots and lots of hugs.
Oh, and write more missions and stuff with them, because I wanna see more. 'kay? :P
I like stories with FicPsych in them. ^_^ But really, I liked this overall. It was well set up, well executed, and satisfyingly concluded. My favorite line was "He stepped out from under the lights, moving for a new pair of gloves--and suddenly found himself staring at a death-struggle sliding along his countertop."
Does this mean we'll be seeing the continued adventures of Fritz and Silas in the near future? *g*
~Neshomeh
I already told you how much I liked it. I know you think action is your weakest point, but I think you articulated what was going on brilliantly without letting any of the tension slide.
Also, hoorah for the Postal Department.
*can't say anything further because she was the beta*