Nice mission! by
Tomash
on 2011-09-22 22:41:00 UTC
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Don't forget to post this to your LJ and/or link it on the wiki.
Awwwww. Excellent piece! by
Cassie Cameron-Young
on 2011-09-22 20:07:00 UTC
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Though I don't have much to say other than that Fritz and Silas need lots and lots and lots of hugs.
Oh, and write more missions and stuff with them, because I wanna see more. 'kay? :P
Oooh, very good. by
Neshomeh
on 2011-09-21 04:19:00 UTC
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I like stories with FicPsych in them. ^_^ But really, I liked this overall. It was well set up, well executed, and satisfyingly concluded. My favorite line was "He stepped out from under the lights, moving for a new pair of gloves--and suddenly found himself staring at a death-struggle sliding along his countertop."
Does this mean we'll be seeing the continued adventures of Fritz and Silas in the near future? *g*
~Neshomeh
Most excellent piece. by
JulyFlame
on 2011-09-21 04:12:00 UTC
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I already told you how much I liked it. I know you think action is your weakest point, but I think you articulated what was going on brilliantly without letting any of the tension slide.
Also, hoorah for the Postal Department.
*can't say anything further because she was the beta*