Subject: Tentatively...
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Posted on: 2011-08-30 15:38:00 UTC

I'm going to say yes. Don't stop reading! I'm glad you had a few people give it a once-over, and you clearly were careful on punctuation and spelling, but you've got some issues to work out, there. The first is easy-- formatting. You have line breaks for paragraphs, and you appear to be doing quotations right, but please either indent your new paragraphs or leave a line of space between them. Once-overs are good, but you could use a beta as well-- I would volunteer, but I'm a terrible procrastinator. If you can catch me on Gtalk (Vixenmage at gmail), or on the IRC, though, I'm usually up to go over bits and bobs with a fine-toothed comb. Ish. Medium-toothed, anyway.

So, you've got permission, but I would greatly appreciate formatting fixes in the future. Sound good?

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