Subject: Lovely. Not.
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Posted on: 2011-08-25 06:14:00 UTC

I did find her birth year ironic though. Seriously? 1984?

I especially liked these lines in the second chapter: "I was intent on writing a fanfiction today, of course, one that starred Maccus and an OC who's pretty much me. Some people may call it Mary - sueish, but I don't care." And why would she be college age when she's 17? The Mary Sue is an idiot too; five seconds means it's about a mile away, not five. And no way would you go out when there's a storm on a beach- I've been to the coast when it's just been raining hard and it's really nasty weather. Such a brilliant figure.

And isn't Tori a nickname for 'Victoria'? Wow. Just wow.

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