Funny Coincidence! by
Will-o-wisp
on 2011-08-23 23:17:00 UTC
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Your RC number has the last three digits of the RC number I was thinking of using! It'll be a long time before I have permission, so there is a very good chance I’ll end up changing it, (especially if you chose it for the same reason I chose it) but seriously, what are the chances of that? Are you by chance an animation/Pixar fan? :D
As for needing a beta, I've never beta-ed anything before, and I've only started seriously writing in about the last 6 months or so; but I think your example was great. You managed to get both back-stories and descriptions in in a way that didn't slow down or clog the narrative, and it was short, sweet and to the point, which is exactly how I think an introduction should be. Also, I liked the short bit with the SO. XD I don’t think it needs to be changed or anything, but you might want to be a second opinion, just in case. c:
Addenum: by
OpinionedAngel
on 2011-08-23 02:03:00 UTC
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As an ineperienced Google.docs user, I've run into a problem with document privacy. Any tips?
Also, If I do get permission, where should I put up my writings? I was thinking maybe LiveJournal...