That was actually... something that was so subconscious I didn't even realize there was something that could work about that. The whole choices thing, I mean.

Honestly, in terms of the badfic excerpting this mission gave me a bit of a hard time, because it /really/ made it hard for me to gauge how much I needed to cut. I ended up going with all those things of text, not because I needed to establish the run-on paragraphs, but because I felt it would be really awkward if I produced a fanfic excerpt that was a line long that had absolutely nothing in the way of punctuation.

Most any crossover CAN be good. Like, it is possible for even the most ludicrous thing to be good.

But it takes respect and care for BOTH canons to make it happen. Also good writing and consideration for all of the loose ends in the crossover.

This one just didn't have any of those things.

So what would be wrong with the person? Primarily being lazy, I guess.

What's the fun of watching someone kill people just for the fun of watching someone kill people?

I don't get it.

I actually rather like the Saw franchise, but the plot of the whole thing gets rather ludicrous after Saw III, I have to admit. The first two managed to keep it manageable, but after III it just got ridiculous. Still, it was nothing if not entertaining for metaphor, so...

And yeah, that makes no sense.

Thanks for the feedback? What did you think of the mission?

The older fanbase of MLP:FiM has this thing where they like to cross it over with EVERYTHING... especially things that it wouldn't normally be crossed over with.

Surprisingly, some of these unlikely stories are quite good. I have seen good crossovers with Alan Wake, with Fallout, and even with God of War (Go figure.)

But then... you get stories like... this one. :\

Are you honestly surprised at that by this point? In all seriousness, though, this is one of the dumber ideas I've ever seen in fanfiction. So... yeah.

Thanks for the feedback! =D