Poor, poor Cadmar. He's rapidly becoming my favorite Butt Monkey. Plus, I'm a sucker for gender-bending stories. As for thoughts/predictions: I wonder how Luxury is going to react ;)

Good mission, but poor Cadmar! I really wanna give him... her... whatever... a hug after this fic, I felt so bad for... her (Damn pronouns...)

She (?) certainly is the group's "Butt Monkey" isn't she?

(Yes, I spend a lot of time on TVTropes, what of it?)

I really enjoyed the vacation part, sort of a "Europe Trip" PPC style...

...after all that, Florestan will have to make an appearance in your next interlude. You know, provide some holding material for Maria... Unfortunately I won't be available to do a dual writing session until the 21st. Aside from the fact I'm still traipsing around Siena at the moment (and let's not also forget that the Palio is happening in two days, which is when things will get absolutely insane there), the hotel's internet is really not very good, so we can't co-work on a googledoc with any reliability. So unfortunately, we'll have to wait a bit. Though, I could potentially e-mail you a couple lines to get us started with that. That shouldn't be too tough, I think.

Extremely entertaining mission. Especially the whole trip around Europe part that rounded out the mission.

And wow, some of the things that Sue did... Just wow. I can see why you were all so pissed off about that. Yeah, crazy times are had.

Hm... In the recruitable OC's bit... I've been formulating starting another response center with another group of peeps to cover some of the stuff F&E can't cover but that I really want to cover really badly. So yeah... I think I'll take Cindy if she's not taken by anyone else.

Extremely intertaining mission. :D

I started reading this mission at 12:30, and I just finished it at 5:30. But it was worth it! This is the best mission I've read in a long while. I love the way you made use of Kreacher, that you showed the surviving Dragons to be just as victimized by the bad writing as Cadmar and the canons, and that you put the agents in a nasty situation and made them deal with it. The vacation section was awesome; I love it when agents get to experience the world a bit, even if the parts they explored this time weren't Potterverse-specific.

I have to admit, I got pretty mad at the Sunflower Official while he was chewing everyone out at the end. I know he was justified in doing so, and he definitely made some good points about equipment upkeep and leaving Kreacher un-neuralyzed (not that that was intentional), but I still couldn't help but feel bad for Cadmar, especially knowing he's going to be missing a part of his identity for an unknown length of time. I think Miah was right to call him out a bit at the end.

I'm rambling...Anyway, I just wanted to say that this was a great, funny mission, and I'm glad I read it, even if it swallowed up my whole afternoon!

I loved the mission. Long, but totally worth reading. Your agents' vacation had me laughing out loud. Warning to future readers: Swallow your Mountain Dew before you read. You'll thank me.

So I'm thinking about another grammar issue, specifically Cadmar's gender-bending and how you switched pronouns for him/her afterward. I'm not sure about the proper pronouns for situations like that. Do you go by physical gender, mental gender, or what? Do you just use those awkward third-gender pronouns? You can't use "it"; that just sounds like they're not a person anymore. Sure, gender-bending isn't real-life, but there have to be grammatical conventions for this somewhere.

More awesomeness from you guys! Whee!