Subject: Decent Writing, Bad Mary Sue
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Posted on: 2011-08-07 23:17:00 UTC
Alonna Jones has the most confusing and Sueish backstory ever. The writing is decent - although the author has no idea how to space dialogue, I have seen worse writing in terms of grammar and mechanics.
The problem is that Alonna Jones is a terrible Hetalia Mary Sue because she claims to represent Hawaii but somehow maintains ties to France and Greece. France was responsible for knocking her up seven times. I kid you not.