Subject: No. Just... No.
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Posted on: 2011-08-11 19:50:00 UTC
...Please tell me that this is a joke. Clearly, the author of that fic is out of her bloody mind.
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Decent Writing, Bad Mary Sue by
on 2011-08-07 23:17:00 UTC
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Alonna Jones has the most confusing and Sueish backstory ever. The writing is decent - although the author has no idea how to space dialogue, I have seen worse writing in terms of grammar and mechanics.
The problem is that Alonna Jones is a terrible Hetalia Mary Sue because she claims to represent Hawaii but somehow maintains ties to France and Greece. France was responsible for knocking her up seven times. I kid you not. -
What. by
on 2011-08-11 19:49:00 UTC
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...Why would anyone do that?!?
I swear, from what I've heard about the Axis Powers Hetalia fandom... things can get downright INSANE. -
Noooo- by
on 2011-08-08 01:35:00 UTC
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I feel the strong urge to bang my head against something. The ignoring of canon in some areas (like America and Canada being the biological children of England and France)- UGH. And it rarely mentions the names of the nations themselves- is she trying to make it an AU and yet never mentions it? Now, where's a good wall or some bleepka?
I'm also going to add onto this their RoChu Mpreg story. Let me quote: "I know it's not rare for someone to rape someone they love if that person doesn't love them back, aru." WTH. And when they try to justify the MPreg- "It's not rare that people have both reproductive tracks". -
No. Just... No. by
on 2011-08-11 19:50:00 UTC
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...Please tell me that this is a joke. Clearly, the author of that fic is out of her bloody mind.
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I'm not even going to try not to scream at that fic. (nm) by
on 2011-08-10 01:47:00 UTC
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