Subject: So Bad
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Posted on: 2011-07-18 22:11:00 UTC
Not even Twilight deserves that. How are your agents still sane?
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Another mission plug! (Twila the girl...) by
on 2011-07-18 17:12:00 UTC
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http://fish-custard.webs.com/twila.htm
Evie and the Fisherman deal with a troll that succeeded in making the Twilight continuum even more unbearable than usual!
There's a short interlude set just after this mission that's coming soon.
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Well done! by
on 2011-07-22 10:40:00 UTC
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Someone actually WROTE that? Ugh. Definitely a troll.
That said, fun mission! I like the snark of your CADs. "Or just run. Fast." :) -
Re: Another mission plug! (Twila the girl...) by
on 2011-07-20 13:25:00 UTC
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Very nice job, very nice indeed. I've been waiting for someone to take care of that for awhile. It's nice to know that it's well and truly dead.
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Thanks! by
on 2011-07-19 23:33:00 UTC
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Thanks to everyone for their assorted compliments! I'm really glad you enjoyed it as much as I did!
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Re: Another mission plug! (Twila the girl...) by
on 2011-07-19 08:42:00 UTC
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This mission was great and you deserve a medal for taking on that piece of drakh. *hands over a blank medal*
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Really good! by
on 2011-07-19 08:37:00 UTC
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"Don’t ask it for impossible things, or it might do something crazy. Like create them.” Great.
I really like your Agents. A Time Lord and an anthropomorphic GLaDOS? Best. Duo. Ever.
A suggestion for all the readers: try to imagine Evie talking in the same manner as the canonical GLaDOS. Doubles the fun. -
Good job! by
on 2011-07-19 07:21:00 UTC
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I'm very happy to see this fic dead. The troll part was pretty good too.
You went with the sparkle wolves? Cool! :] (I'll probably try adopting one, heh heh.) And the other canons were definitely more OOC than Edward. (Isn't he considered a Canon 'Sue also?) Good mission overall! -
Bravo! by
on 2011-07-19 02:12:00 UTC
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This was, overall, a very entertaining mission. The interactions between your agents was well done and I enjoyed how you made the troll a viable threat. Too often I think we get rid of the various Sues, Stus, and what-have-yous far too easily, so it was nice to see a bit of a struggle.
I was not, however, a fan of how you brought Bella back. Not because I hate Bella (I really couldn't care less), but because of the time travel aspect. It felt... sloppy, I guess. I can't quite put my finger on it.
But besides that? Awesome. -
Re: Bravo! by
on 2011-07-20 06:16:00 UTC
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Personally, I'd have liked it more if you killed the troll by deflating its ego or making such a display of ignoring it that it kills itself trying to get the agents' attention, but maybe that's just my preference for poetic justice. My splitting hairs aside, good work.
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Re: Bravo! by
on 2011-07-19 08:54:00 UTC
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If it means anything, I did try to think of a better way to do that, but I couldn't think of anything that allowed relevant charges to be collected and Bella to survive. Don't worry, random time travel won't become a deus ex machina in my missions. :P
Other than that, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the concrit. ^_^ -
Re: Another mission plug! (Twila the girl...) by
on 2011-07-18 22:44:00 UTC
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The fic.... It's like My Immortal. D:
Wow. If I ever stepped into a Twilight fic for a mission, I'd be tempted to tell Bella to grow a spine too. -
So Bad by
on 2011-07-18 22:11:00 UTC
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Not even Twilight deserves that. How are your agents still sane?
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Sane? What is this? :P (nm) by
on 2011-07-18 22:36:00 UTC
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Is there a list of minis? by
on 2011-07-18 18:50:00 UTC
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Exactly how many sparklewolves are up for adoption?
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Aw crud, I knew I'd forgotten something! by
on 2011-07-18 19:22:00 UTC
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Adoption by
on 2011-07-21 20:41:00 UTC
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Would you mind if I adopted Carlose? I’ve always wanted to have my own sparkling mini-wolf. eue
Loved your mission by the way! Your agents really work well together, and it’s one of the few missions that has made me laugh out loud in a while. Hope to see more soon! ^_^ -
Wiki page done by
on 2011-07-18 20:01:00 UTC
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http://ppc.wikia.com/wiki/Mini/Twilight
Adopt away, there are plenty to go around! I wonder what the record for most minis from a single fic is? -
Adoption by
on 2011-07-18 22:31:00 UTC
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Aww, mini-Sparklewolves sound adorable. May I adopt Edword, please? :D
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Of course! Make your claim on the wiki! (nm) by
on 2011-07-18 23:11:00 UTC
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Adoption by
on 2011-07-18 19:32:00 UTC
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May I have my agents Chalk and Jenka adopt Jessa, please?
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Oh my! by
on 2011-07-18 18:40:00 UTC
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! by
on 2011-07-18 23:01:00 UTC
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And yes, for all the canon defilement, Edward wasn't that OOC.
As for the music, well, how could I not. ^_~