Subject: That is a good point...
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Posted on: 2011-07-16 05:11:00 UTC
Besides, it DOES steal the major plot device from Back to the Future, and the title of the thing is a really bad take on that title, so theoretically, we could use that as a loophole to make it coverable by the DIC.
Still, I won't touch it unless I have a pair of DMS agents with F&E. I don't think Florestan would be able to take how horrible a person Denisha is...
So... what've we got today? Well, we've got a Mary Sue, Dom Frollo being called attractive, major OOCness, a needlessly convoluted plot, possible rape scenes...
Oh, and did we mention that the Sue is a teacher written by a real-life Social Studies teacher... who doesn't even get the nationality of Christopher Colombus or when he "discovered: the New World right?
http://crazedwriter.lbbhost.com/fanfiction1.html
You get that mess of a fanfic. I actually found out about it from this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=at6m9MoqtDQ&feature=feedu
That does a more than ample job of summing up all of that fic's problems.
Are we talking the original Victor Hugo novel, or the Disney version of "Hunchback of Notre Dame"?
. . . that this one hasn't shown up here before. It's been notorious on the GAFF/WGW boards for years; Danisha is a bit of a figure of horror in some circles. Not quite Legendary Badfic, but definitely long past high time she was taken care of.
Really? I figured as much, what with her being as idiotic as she is. Also, for all that stuff she did to Esmerelda, am I right?
Yeah, I think it could be cool if someone did a mission on this. But... I'm not quite a DMS person, so...
Yeah, it's a Sue, but it's also trans-dimensional hopping and snatching up the wazoo from what I've gathered so far from the review. That's definitely in the DIC's jurisdiction.
~Neshomeh, helpful (for a given definition).
Besides, it DOES steal the major plot device from Back to the Future, and the title of the thing is a really bad take on that title, so theoretically, we could use that as a loophole to make it coverable by the DIC.
Still, I won't touch it unless I have a pair of DMS agents with F&E. I don't think Florestan would be able to take how horrible a person Denisha is...
I'm not all that familiar with the canon, so I can't comment much on the fic itself (although I certainly wouldn't disagree with the 'needlessly convoluted' part).
However, the important thing is that someone else on here watches 'The Fanfiction Critic'! Yay!
Okay...so, if this were based on the book, it could be forgiven: in the book, Frollo is a complex, conflicted character with real humanity. It is not. It is movie Frollo, who is, hands-down, the most evil villian in Disney history: Why do so many people insist on putting him in leather pants?