(I just want you to know that I almost signed my name as my badfic alter ego. Seriously.)

This was a great, and funny mission, just I expect when I see Suicide and Diocletian in the subject line!

I found some lines that I really liked.



“It's Glorfindel's body wash. He doesn't strike me as a cinnamon kind of guy.”




“What's a ninja?”


“Basically? You, less drunk.”




“Cheer up, Dio. It's short.”


Diocletian was not cheered.


“It's a continuum full of often-shirtless soldiers.”


Diocletian was partially cheered.



The walls began to ooze with sar-plasm,




“It's a bad guy,” Suicide explained, patting the mini on the head. “A bad guy from a cartoon universe, no less. Well done, Sargeant Commander! Keep up the goo--bad work, and I'll get you a baby seal to skin.”




Also, I really liked that the Sue's blood was olive green glitter. Perfect touch for a military Sue. Man that type of ignore all military protocol Sue is annoying! I run across them sometimes in Stargate.

Anyway, thanks for the entertaining mission!

Man, I love these two in action.

Hey, Tungsten... do you mind if I use your Duo in a cameo for my introductory prologue-chapter? I need someone to look through binoculars to try to fathom the sheer number of people coming into headquarters while a Star Destroyer is being Fumigated. I also need someone to ask what the smeg is going on and why is Upstairs going along with it.

Please?

The green shirt 'Sue was just... wow.

And like everyone says, Su and Dio really do work well of each other. And the Fictionary is really cool too, I like the "old beat up" gameboy idea, it sounds like something the DoSAT would make. XD

Some one already caught the typo that I was going to report. Anyways, I do like the interplay between Su and Dio. Suicide is the perfect person for this mission, the military is pretty much the same in any time period.

Good work and I look forward to seeing more from these two.

-Phobos

I laughed. That Sue... Even I know that they'd get flogged for that kind of behavior.

But the author sounds worse, honestly. I hate authors that just say "stop whining" to concrit that point out the flaws of a story.

Fun mission! And Su and Dio really play off each other incredibly well.

That was a fun mission (though I admit I'm unfamiliar with GI Joe). Also, sweet Andraste, an animated green shirt. That's almost as bad as that walking sandwich guy.

Oh, I like Su and Dio. I really, really like them. They are so funny together.

I'm very intrigued by the Fictionary. Are there more of them? I imagine they would be very useful in crossover missions, where the agents don't know one of the canons, like anytime Twilight is crossed with something respectable.

Oh, and one possible nitpick: “They word for the bad guys, Cobra.”