Subject: Yep, a green shirt.
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Posted on: 2011-07-04 20:13:00 UTC
Sandwich!Stu is still my favorite, but I gotta admit, I giggled like a loon when I found that typo.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Subject: Yep, a green shirt.
Author:
Posted on: 2011-07-04 20:13:00 UTC
Sandwich!Stu is still my favorite, but I gotta admit, I giggled like a loon when I found that typo.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
http://bronzeclockwork.livejournal.com/1456.html#cutid1
Su and Dio's first solo mission since returning! It's been a while, but I hope the new missions can still entertain a bit. :) Here lurketh living pieces of clothing, Pocket Fictionaries, a sad but (mostly) accurate dose of reality, a pissy Sue who seems a wee bit confused about how the chain of command functions, and of course, Naughty Language.
The mini-BAT (Battle Android Trooper) Sargeant Commander is currently up for adoption. Since he's a mini robot villain based on an '80s series, any owner will need to promise to feed him a diet of pure evil, and not expose him to too much complex characterization.
(I just want you to know that I almost signed my name as my badfic alter ego. Seriously.)
This was a great, and funny mission, just I expect when I see Suicide and Diocletian in the subject line!
I found some lines that I really liked.
“It's Glorfindel's body wash. He doesn't strike me as a cinnamon kind of guy.”
“What's a ninja?”
“Basically? You, less drunk.”
“Cheer up, Dio. It's short.”
Diocletian was not cheered.
“It's a continuum full of often-shirtless soldiers.”
Diocletian was partially cheered.
The walls began to ooze with sar-plasm,
“It's a bad guy,” Suicide explained, patting the mini on the head. “A bad guy from a cartoon universe, no less. Well done, Sargeant Commander! Keep up the goo--bad work, and I'll get you a baby seal to skin.”
Also, I really liked that the Sue's blood was olive green glitter. Perfect touch for a military Sue. Man that type of ignore all military protocol Sue is annoying! I run across them sometimes in Stargate.
Anyway, thanks for the entertaining mission!
Man, I love these two in action.
Hey, Tungsten... do you mind if I use your Duo in a cameo for my introductory prologue-chapter? I need someone to look through binoculars to try to fathom the sheer number of people coming into headquarters while a Star Destroyer is being Fumigated. I also need someone to ask what the smeg is going on and why is Upstairs going along with it.
Please?
Glad you liked it! :) And sure, if you want. They're pretty easy to write into any situation, since it boils down to "one's an ex-Sue. One's an ancient warrior. THEY FIGHT CRIME." XD
The green shirt 'Sue was just... wow.
And like everyone says, Su and Dio really do work well of each other. And the Fictionary is really cool too, I like the "old beat up" gameboy idea, it sounds like something the DoSAT would make. XD
My theory is that half of DoSAT's tech is recycled out of the other half of DoSAT's tech, so the I imagined the Fictionary being a cobbled-together product of that. Plus, you just know they would have originally found a way to make Gameboys explode anyway. :D
Some one already caught the typo that I was going to report. Anyways, I do like the interplay between Su and Dio. Suicide is the perfect person for this mission, the military is pretty much the same in any time period.
Good work and I look forward to seeing more from these two.
-Phobos
. . . is praise indeed. Danke!
I laughed. That Sue... Even I know that they'd get flogged for that kind of behavior.
But the author sounds worse, honestly. I hate authors that just say "stop whining" to concrit that point out the flaws of a story.
Fun mission! And Su and Dio really play off each other incredibly well.
Thank you! I definitely enjoyed writing this one. For such a short mission, it had soooo much bad.
The author definitely didn't respond well to concrit, let's say.
That was a fun mission (though I admit I'm unfamiliar with GI Joe). Also, sweet Andraste, an animated green shirt. That's almost as bad as that walking sandwich guy.
Sandwich!Stu is still my favorite, but I gotta admit, I giggled like a loon when I found that typo.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Oh, I like Su and Dio. I really, really like them. They are so funny together.
I'm very intrigued by the Fictionary. Are there more of them? I imagine they would be very useful in crossover missions, where the agents don't know one of the canons, like anytime Twilight is crossed with something respectable.
Oh, and one possible nitpick: “They word for the bad guys, Cobra.”
I'm certain there's more Pocket Fictionaries; they're probably rare, since DoSAT seems to be still experimenting with them, but I'm sure agents could wrangle a couple if it really warranted it. And a Twilight crossover would definitely warrant it. 0_0
And thank you! I'm glad it amused; Su and Dio are so much fun to write.
Gah, typo! Will fix right away. Thanks for spotting it.