Yeah...when you see Sues that pointlessly overpowered, the author wasn't even trying. Glad to see these ones bite the dust. I wish I could spork some of this Suethor's other stuff, but they all contain canons I don't know. So uh...uuuuuhhhhh...*Is distracted by Kirox killing Slenderman. Freaking Slenderman.*

Anyway, a couple of mistakes in your mission:

Just before Lunavier's weapon turns into a staff (or whatever is supposed to be happening there) you spell her name Lunaveir. Best see about that mini-Sue before it wreaks any havoc.

"Florestan frowned as this message boomed in and out of the landscape as the group of canons." I think the end of that sentence is missing something.

Excellent mission, HerrWozzeck. *pets a mini*

It's great that there are other agents doing Dragon Age as well.
Although I can't help being a little bit envious. I have a Dragon Age fic lined up and there are a ton of minis in it, and I was going to make them mini-Mabaris. Now what am I going do with all my great jokes about dog-slobber? :P

But congrats on killing of such a horrible beast. And yeah, none of it made any sense.