Subject: Nicely done!
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Posted on: 2011-07-02 18:37:00 UTC
Seriously, I don't know much about the Haruhi Suzumiya canon (though I am working on it), but this fic is just... GAAAAHHHH!
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First Mission - Odd Experiences - Haruhi Suzumiya (NSFW) by
on 2011-06-28 16:30:00 UTC
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Didn't take me long to get stuck in! :P
http://fish-custard.webs.com/oddexperiences.htm
New(ish) Agents Evie and the Fisherman take on a squicky PWP lemon in the Suzumiya-verse, contending with a hermaphrodite with Bad Biology and one particularly submissive character undergoing something of a personality transplant.
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Nicely done! by
on 2011-07-02 18:37:00 UTC
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Seriously, I don't know much about the Haruhi Suzumiya canon (though I am working on it), but this fic is just... GAAAAHHHH!
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Thanks! Glad you all enjoyed the mission! :) (nm) by
on 2011-06-29 10:42:00 UTC
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Oh my... by
on 2011-06-29 00:13:00 UTC
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Wow, that was kinda ridiculous... Especially the hermaphrodite!sex bit.
Also, I would've said I went in there because I wouldn't know that it's bad otherwise, but that's just me.
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Good job! by
on 2011-06-28 21:48:00 UTC
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I especially liked The Fisherman. Both of your agents were pretty funny, and the mission was good overall. Very nice job.
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Great work! by
on 2011-06-28 20:46:00 UTC
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I like that you use excerpts from the text, rather than just referring to what the characters does. I think missions are best when you see parts of the original fic in all its awfulness.
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I much prefer that method too... by
on 2011-06-29 10:43:00 UTC
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...when reading missions, and it helps with writing them too; it better allows you to react to the fic and its horror!
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Nice one! by
on 2011-06-28 18:36:00 UTC
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I loved the Portal reference.
But now I have a question. Are we sure that the raw fabric of time is capable of killing that Sue? 'Cause they often tend to be quite tough. -
Thank you ^_^ by
on 2011-06-28 19:18:00 UTC
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Hmm... you might be right about the assassination though. The last thing we want is for the Sue to land somewhere else in spacetime and cause more havoc. I think I might retcon in a more... final death for her.