Beta needed for an "experimental" mission

Subject: Beta needed for an "experimental" mission
Author: Sergio Turbo
Posted on: 2011-06-12 21:01:00 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RndOKiJhw9FlVFb-tHKzIoNWfIZ0YADNvbUAyZnI0/edit?hl=en_US&authkey=CI31pdcG

This is my famous "mission with fighter jets".

I need, besides SPAG and canon-checks (Ace Combat and Harry Potter involved. A very bad crossover), also some concrit about the plot of the mission itself, since it's unlike anything already done in the PPC.

It was oruiginally meant to go on with my Agents wandering in HQ, but there was enough to warrant an interlude instead (and the mission was already slighty over 10 pages long in standard Googledocs format)

Does it work?

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Beta needed for an "experimental" mission by Sergio Turbo on 2011-06-12 21:01:00 UTC

I'll SPaG it if ya like. by sirbayer on 2011-06-13 20:56:00 UTC Reply

You have only my word for credentials, but hey, worst I can do is nothing at all. I'll look it over. Don't know the Canon, but I'll look into the plot as well.

Thanks (nm) by Sergio Turbo on 2011-06-14 09:49:00 UTC Reply

I could give it a shot... by Gamma on 2011-06-13 02:27:00 UTC Reply

But I can't even view it until Wednesday at the latest, as my computer is kaput and I'm using an old laptop of my dads.
This thing barely opens the board, so I can forget about Google Docs for a few days, until the recovery disk things come in the mail.
So yeah.

Don't worry. by Sergio Turbo on 2011-06-13 10:46:00 UTC Reply

If you have troubles in fixing your PC, ask. I'll give you some help.