Subject: I'll SPaG it if ya like.
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Posted on: 2011-06-13 20:56:00 UTC
You have only my word for credentials, but hey, worst I can do is nothing at all. I'll look it over. Don't know the Canon, but I'll look into the plot as well.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RndOKiJhw9FlVFb-tHKzIoNWfIZ0YADNvbUAyZnI0/edit?hl=en_US&authkey=CI31pdcG
This is my famous "mission with fighter jets".
I need, besides SPAG and canon-checks (Ace Combat and Harry Potter involved. A very bad crossover), also some concrit about the plot of the mission itself, since it's unlike anything already done in the PPC.
It was oruiginally meant to go on with my Agents wandering in HQ, but there was enough to warrant an interlude instead (and the mission was already slighty over 10 pages long in standard Googledocs format)
Does it work?
You have only my word for credentials, but hey, worst I can do is nothing at all. I'll look it over. Don't know the Canon, but I'll look into the plot as well.
But I can't even view it until Wednesday at the latest, as my computer is kaput and I'm using an old laptop of my dads.
This thing barely opens the board, so I can forget about Google Docs for a few days, until the recovery disk things come in the mail.
So yeah.
If you have troubles in fixing your PC, ask. I'll give you some help.