Subject: Hetalia Badfic
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Posted on: 2011-06-09 07:11:00 UTC

So, I've finally decided to post these after saving them up for a couple of weeks or so. I'm not quite sure if they're mission worthy, but they struck me as being pretty bad and at least worthy to show to y'all. I'll post these on the unclaimed badfic page later when I'm able to get to a computer as it's a pain to try editing things on the wiki while on a phone. ;]

http://m.fanfiction.net/s/6663613/1/  
Everything i ask for by glassheart14 
Denmark and Norway are living in a fairytale life, all Denmark wants is for Norway to put on that ring. Their relasionship is put to the test when Norway reveals a shocking secret that will change thier lives forever. MPreg warning!
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 34 - Words: 52,308 - Reviews: 215 - Updated: 6-6-11 - Published: 1-17-11 - Denmark & Norway

My comment: Only got to chapter ten so far. Of thirty-four. All the characters, especially Norway and Iceland, are quite a bit OOC and Norway gets /pregnant/. (No surprise there sadly.) The spelling and grammar are also slowly killing me as I'm trying to get through this godawful fic. Someone needs to exorcise (or whatever is needed) these characters soon because this thing is driving me insane. D:
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/6953786/1/  
Take Me Away by Darkmoonphase
For 12 years, Arthur and Francis have had to deal with their sons' disappearances, hoping for some sort of closure. For 12 years, Alfred and Matthew have been living a comfortable life. Full summary inside, unfortunately... D:
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 21,799 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 5-29-11 - Published: 4-30-11 - England/Britain & France

My comment: Looked okay at first, but somewhere around chapter two or three I noticed that England and France (Arthur and Francis, for those who don't know) seemed a bit OOC. The situation seemed more and more unrealistic and ridiculous and then I got to chapter 5 and the lack of research there. O.o Two hermaphrodites with suggested fully functional male and female reproductive systems is just about impossible. (I'm hoping that's only an assumption. Oh dear lord how I hope...)

http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7019885/1/#d_menu  
Erityisiä  karkkeja by KairiHyugaKuchiki
Finland finally went all the way with Sweden and is facing the consequences of that "out of character" night. Finland is facing denial and depression but of course he has Sweden and maybe even Sealand to cheer him up. Mpreg,human names used and depression
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 521 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-24-11 - Finland & Sweden

My comment: Only one chapter and yet it's horribly done. Not only is there ridiculous mpreg ("Who am I kidding, Japan said that it one hundred percent, that every nation who was on the bottom would be pregnant.") but Sweden seems to be forcing Finland to keep the baby though he's 'letting him make the choice' ("Th't's up t' y'u, but y'u are n't h'aving an ab'rtion." -Translation from Sweden's accent/mumbling being "That's up to you, but you are not having an abortion."). Overall not so good. 

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