Subject: Re: Understandable
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Posted on: 2011-06-10 04:56:00 UTC
Actually, I meant that in the sense of "if I read this, I bet that I'm going to bang my head on the wall over that."
Also, it's sorta a relief that there are no lemons and limes. It's not much for these fics, but at least I can get by with reading them without the major squick.
So, I've finally decided to post these after saving them up for a couple of weeks or so. I'm not quite sure if they're mission worthy, but they struck me as being pretty bad and at least worthy to show to y'all. I'll post these on the unclaimed badfic page later when I'm able to get to a computer as it's a pain to try editing things on the wiki while on a phone. ;]
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/6663613/1/
Everything i ask for by glassheart14
Denmark and Norway are living in a fairytale life, all Denmark wants is for Norway to put on that ring. Their relasionship is put to the test when Norway reveals a shocking secret that will change thier lives forever. MPreg warning!
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 34 - Words: 52,308 - Reviews: 215 - Updated: 6-6-11 - Published: 1-17-11 - Denmark & Norway
My comment: Only got to chapter ten so far. Of thirty-four. All the characters, especially Norway and Iceland, are quite a bit OOC and Norway gets /pregnant/. (No surprise there sadly.) The spelling and grammar are also slowly killing me as I'm trying to get through this godawful fic. Someone needs to exorcise (or whatever is needed) these characters soon because this thing is driving me insane. D:
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/6953786/1/
Take Me Away by Darkmoonphase
For 12 years, Arthur and Francis have had to deal with their sons' disappearances, hoping for some sort of closure. For 12 years, Alfred and Matthew have been living a comfortable life. Full summary inside, unfortunately... D:
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 21,799 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 5-29-11 - Published: 4-30-11 - England/Britain & France
My comment: Looked okay at first, but somewhere around chapter two or three I noticed that England and France (Arthur and Francis, for those who don't know) seemed a bit OOC. The situation seemed more and more unrealistic and ridiculous and then I got to chapter 5 and the lack of research there. O.o Two hermaphrodites with suggested fully functional male and female reproductive systems is just about impossible. (I'm hoping that's only an assumption. Oh dear lord how I hope...)
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7019885/1/#d_menu
Erityisiä karkkeja by KairiHyugaKuchiki
Finland finally went all the way with Sweden and is facing the consequences of that "out of character" night. Finland is facing denial and depression but of course he has Sweden and maybe even Sealand to cheer him up. Mpreg,human names used and depression
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 521 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-24-11 - Finland & Sweden
My comment: Only one chapter and yet it's horribly done. Not only is there ridiculous mpreg ("Who am I kidding, Japan said that it one hundred percent, that every nation who was on the bottom would be pregnant.") but Sweden seems to be forcing Finland to keep the baby though he's 'letting him make the choice' ("Th't's up t' y'u, but y'u are n't h'aving an ab'rtion." -Translation from Sweden's accent/mumbling being "That's up to you, but you are not having an abortion."). Overall not so good.
Wow. Can i just say that, WOW. You have NO right to sit here and tell people about your "badfic" opinions. It causes the creators of these stories a bit of pain. This is their work, their ideas, their opinions, and their worlds/universes. And they have given you fair warning that its an MPreg fic. Avoid it. How about you show us what YOU have and we can judge you? Would you like that? If not, then why don't you jump off a cliff with your "badfic" crap.
but then again haters gonna hate :) enjoy a lonely life with your hating!
I'm kinda scarred to read those fics. Based off your comments, those fics are not sounding too good right now.
However, they're all Teen rating. Badly written, but still no major squick. The second is probably the safest to read without developing the urge to bang your head onto something in frustration. No lemons or really limes for any of them, just... frustrating. (And I think I'm developing sadistic/self-harming tendencies for my brain as I'm still reading that first badfic and subsequently keep banging my head on my desk or wall. It's so OOC that the Preg!Norway is basically a woman, I swear. DX)
Actually, I meant that in the sense of "if I read this, I bet that I'm going to bang my head on the wall over that."
Also, it's sorta a relief that there are no lemons and limes. It's not much for these fics, but at least I can get by with reading them without the major squick.