'Cause seriously, damn. O.o I'm not complaining, 'cause it was hilarious, but I'm pretty sure it doesn't actually work that way. Nume would be so screwed if it did. {X D

I was going to point some things out, but all I can remember is you said "wondering" instead of "wandering" at some point. Oh, and "principals office" instead of "principal's office" a few times.

On the upside, like I said, this was hilarious, and I particularly like how your choice of title ties in both with the title of the badfic and Thomas', uh, trip. Also, you made me think of other ways of messing up Orken's name apart from rhyming, and I came up with Iron Barbie. You're welcome. *g*

~Neshomeh

Aw, poor Orky and Thomas, bonding over Bleeprin.

Fun mission, especially at the part when Orky had to ad lib something to get the Sue off his back. That part was hilarious.

Keep up the good work, Guv! =D