Subject: I meant something...
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Posted on: 2011-06-07 00:41:00 UTC
The correct form for the story is Principal's, as in Principal's Office, whether or not that is what is there. I think I fixed all of them. Unless that's wrong?
Mission 4: Thomas' Excellent Adventure
An incredibly obvious Sue in the Stargate SG-1 continuum nearly drives Thomas crazy with her badness
Minis:
Mini-Unas:
General Laundry (Not up for adoption, sorry!)
Jane t Frasier
Mini-Wratih:
Lt. Col. Even Lorne
Also, Ry'ac was pulled back into badfic. Poor guy. My agents got him home safely though, don't worry!
If anyone is interested in adopting the "small seizer," I'm taking trades.
'Cause seriously, damn. O.o I'm not complaining, 'cause it was hilarious, but I'm pretty sure it doesn't actually work that way. Nume would be so screwed if it did. {X D
I was going to point some things out, but all I can remember is you said "wondering" instead of "wandering" at some point. Oh, and "principals office" instead of "principal's office" a few times.
On the upside, like I said, this was hilarious, and I particularly like how your choice of title ties in both with the title of the badfic and Thomas', uh, trip. Also, you made me think of other ways of messing up Orken's name apart from rhyming, and I came up with Iron Barbie. You're welcome. *g*
~Neshomeh
That, and this is the first time Thomas has ever taken Bleeprin. He has no tolerance for the stuff. Usually he hits his head on walls to blur out badfic.
And I didn't get all the principle's? I changed some stuff in that section after Ctrl +fing them out. I'll fix it.
I'm guessing Iron Barbie comes from War Ken?
I don't think we've ever seen anyone take that much the first time, so that's plausible.
Ore Ken, actually. *g*
~Neshomeh
The correct form for the story is Principal's, as in Principal's Office, whether or not that is what is there. I think I fixed all of them. Unless that's wrong?
Aw, poor Orky and Thomas, bonding over Bleeprin.
Fun mission, especially at the part when Orky had to ad lib something to get the Sue off his back. That part was hilarious.
Keep up the good work, Guv! =D