Subject: Nice!
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Posted on: 2011-05-30 09:37:00 UTC
It was still funny. Poor Shinra, she kinda looked like a ball in a pinball machine with all those portals...
And, judjing by both her Wiki page and this mission, I think that she must never meet Corolla. Or the little Floater would get hugged, kidnapped and adopted. Material for a new Things I Am Not Allowed To Do In HQ, perhaps?
Yes, after many years of not writing for the PPC, a new mission! Starting from scratch and re-writing Shinra's misadventures from the top all over again. Sorry for the lack of funny for the first part. Just getting back into the swing of things.
So, just to clarify some things with the Oldbies...Agent Shinra used to be an agent in the DMS, but switched to the Department of Intelligence after the incidents in 2008 for personal and practical reasons. And so, she gets all new adventures! But don't worry, I'll go back in time every now and again in an attempt to have her past in written form as well~! That includes the weddings, hahaha.
So anyways...the new mission!
Part 1 - Beginning Anew
Or in Which Agent Shinra Is Attacked by a Lot of Beige
Returning from taking a long vacation from her work as a part of the action side of the PPC, Shinra is given an easy assignment of looking through a romance driven story in the Dissidia universe...or Kingdom Hearts...er...where was she again?
Once again, I apologize for the lack of funny. D= With all the beige there was, I barely had anything to work with!
~Keily
That badfic is...wow. Just wow. Poor canons, namely Sora, Tidus and Cloud (my favorites out of the ones listed).
As for the Sue...what do you call it? It's not even a being with a form- it's a Formless!Sue. It's a new type of Sue! The description is so bland that it has no form whatsoever and is just an amorphous blob! This may be our most dangerous foe yet!
Also, I hope I'm not nitpicking, but I noticed that in this sentence-
Also...might not be safe for work, even though the writing does not at all merit the M rating at all.
-you put "at all" twice. Just wanted to point that out. Don't want to be doing things the Suethors might do.
I too, like cameos. They're always fun to see.
I'm not terribly familiar with the canon, but that did not prove to be much of an issue with this story. So good job on that.
I have two things I'd like to point out, however.
"Even MORE point objects?" Perhaps should be "pointy" or "pointed"
"If the rest of the fanfiction prove toxic" Should be "proved"
Of course, that's less than people find in my missions with three beta readers. So no real complaint there. Just thought I'd point them out.
Who doesn't like to see random cameos? Always good to see that little bit of universal unity.
Yay! It is nice to see new stuff from you. Also, thanks for the cameo-- I kind of wish other people would do cameos more often from others. Sometimes I think each RC is a little island. :U
Yuck... I'm working on a mission and a half at the moment, but yuck. Fic like this is more pointless than anything. I'd take it if I was free.
Plus I've had experience for writing Agent Corbett somewhat decently. *winkwink* And I had to do a scene of right before Aster goes on her own way with Shinra to re-establish her character. And, well, if you ever want to use Shinra from time to time for silly, motherly cameos when she isn't falling out of portals in the most ungainly manner possible, I'm fine with it. Or we could do a scary collab of DOOM.
I should find a Portal badfic...if only so we can laugh at Shinra cursing the existence of portals in general. But next mission is in Assassin's Creed. Shinra will not be pleased. :|
It's okay. Just reporting it in for anyone who wants to take it. XD
As they say,
Speedy thing goes in, speedy thing comes out...
I'm sure GLaDOS would approve of an experiment involving a Mary-Sue and velocity. And lemons. Exploding ones! :3
It was still funny. Poor Shinra, she kinda looked like a ball in a pinball machine with all those portals...
And, judjing by both her Wiki page and this mission, I think that she must never meet Corolla. Or the little Floater would get hugged, kidnapped and adopted. Material for a new Things I Am Not Allowed To Do In HQ, perhaps?
...Shinra would probably be all over her, because she's so tiny and cute and adorable and probably needs a mama. Her scary side not withstanding. Shinra's used to dealing with surly young women, no matter their origins, species...and sometimes age, too. XD
Thanks a lot. I'm a bit rusty when writing for PPC and humor/parody in general. @.@ It's been a long time since I've actively tried to be funny outside of certain stories of mine....
A pinball would be an accurate description. XD Shinra is pretty sure the universe hates her somehow.