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Subject: Mission: DBS- Orion and Mal - SGA
Author: Pretzel
Posted on: 2011-05-26 20:33:00 UTC

Newly partnered DBS Agents Orion and Mal have to figure out just what it is that Major Lorne wants in their first mission together.

WARNINGS: Due to excerpts used of the fic in question, this mission is NSFW, and the fic itself is also NSFB. Also, there are mentions of non-consensual sex, rape, improbable biology, language, and general stupidity, so be warned if you're sensitive to that.

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Mission: DBS- Orion and Mal - SGA by Pretzel on 2011-05-26 20:33:00 UTC

Re: Mission: DBS- Orion and Mal - SGA by Meta on 2011-05-27 18:40:00 UTC Reply

Another fun mission. Now where can I get me one of those Homofobs?

Well, what do you have to trade for it? *grin* (nm) by Pretzel on 2011-05-27 20:36:00 UTC Reply

Re: Well, what do you have to trade for it? *grin* by Meta on 2011-05-28 22:38:00 UTC Reply

Ooh, I'm sure we can find something worth trading.

Nice one! by Fish Custard on 2011-05-27 10:16:00 UTC Reply

Great mission. :) That thing definitely needed to die, so good on you for killing it. Now have some bleeprin...

Thank you! by Pretzel on 2011-05-27 10:18:00 UTC Reply

I'll definitely need the bleeprin for when I'm writing up Ian and Lee's next mission. It's a brain-hurting one set in the Sorcerer's Apprentice 'Verse.

Good mission by Guvnor of Space on 2011-05-26 21:19:00 UTC Reply

While I don't traditionally read slash, or bad slash missions, I'm trying to broaden my horizons.

I liked this mission. In particular, I enjoyed Abe.

Of course, it wouldn't be a bad idea to get a beta or two. I found this: "With trepidation she pulled out her CAD out of her pocket" but I'm not the best at catching stuff, so there could very well be more. There were some other instances that could probably have been phrased better or used less repetition, but these are nit-picks. It was a good mission, overall.

Thanks! by Pretzel on 2011-05-26 21:29:00 UTC Reply

Someone was supposed to beta, but I think they forgot. I'll have another look-through and see if I can't find anything else.