Subject: Interesting continuum.
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Posted on: 2011-05-12 05:34:00 UTC

Your sample piece was quite good-- I didn't spot any grammatical errors. Granted, I do have a bit of an issue with the formatting, which needs a bit of work-- either stick to one line between each paragraph, or indentation every single new line. Or both, preferably. That, and I'll expect language warnings on your pieces if you're going to be swearing-- we do have a pg-13 code, so language warnings are a Good Thing.

But those are both very easy fixes; your characters are interesting, your grammar and spelling are excellent, and your writing style is nifty. Permission granted! I look forward to your missions in general.

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