Subject: Also!
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Posted on: 2011-05-10 16:25:00 UTC
I'd also like to use RC 43042, but I'm admittedly not entirely sure if it's available.
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Permission Application! by
on 2011-05-10 16:10:00 UTC
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Agent Drew Charles
-Age: 19
-Gender: Male
-Orientation: Pansexual
-Home Continuum: World War Z
-Drew is not a fighter by nature. The only reason he survived the apocalypse is because he’s good at sneaking about. He eventually met up with another survivor, and they worked together to stay alive*. Whether his sanity managed the same feat is… questionable, to say the least.
*See sample piece
-Fandoms: Plenty. Particularly anything by Douglas Adams, Terry Pratchett, and Garth Ennis.
-Lust objects: Tallahassee (Zombieland), Dr. Frank N. Furter (Rocky Horror Picture Show), Ilany Brükner (Deadpool Original Run)
-Quote: “Clearly, the only solution to this is knives. And quite possibly dakka.”
Agent Lucius Sievert
-Age: 20
-Gender: Male
-Orientation: Heterosexual
-Home Continuum: Gentleman Bastards-verse
-Agent Lucius was a member of one of the larger gangs in the great city of Camorr. He was one of the lucky ones who survived the rise of the Grey King, and retired shortly afterwards, citing “I’m too old for this bloody lump of-“.
-Fandoms and Lust Objects: He’s a bit new to this.
-Quote: “What have I gotten myself into this time?”
Desired Department: Department of Floaters
First Mission: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6650342/1/NewKid (Zombieland)
Writing Sample: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/11Tye2ehq0HpZ8N8pwiqZ6bgjtnDxyEOFKCyqJdtg0/edit?hl=en&pli=1&authkey=CPv797sD">https://docs.google.com/document/d/11Tye2ehq0HpZ_8N8pwiqZ6bgjtnDxyEOFKCyqJdtg0/edit?hl=en&pli=1&authkey=CPv797sD# (Thanks to EF, Rosie, and Caddy for Beta-ing) -
Interesting continuum. by
on 2011-05-12 05:34:00 UTC
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Your sample piece was quite good-- I didn't spot any grammatical errors. Granted, I do have a bit of an issue with the formatting, which needs a bit of work-- either stick to one line between each paragraph, or indentation every single new line. Or both, preferably. That, and I'll expect language warnings on your pieces if you're going to be swearing-- we do have a pg-13 code, so language warnings are a Good Thing.
But those are both very easy fixes; your characters are interesting, your grammar and spelling are excellent, and your writing style is nifty. Permission granted! I look forward to your missions in general. -
Also! by
on 2011-05-10 16:25:00 UTC
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I'd also like to use RC 43042, but I'm admittedly not entirely sure if it's available.