Subject: 'Nother mission
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Posted on: 2011-05-08 07:26:00 UTC
I actually wrote this one a while ago and waited to post it, but here it is now. I made this mission mainly because I thought it was high time to humiliate Caleb, and I felt like doing a little fangirling-by-proxy.
Posted on Googledocs. Enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YS3X_KSFrKmP3jubG7NpmNPgwMGCFmO-WIYbPWBySN0/edit?hl=en&authkey=CL2F9MsM#
It can be a difficult thing to make me laugh out loud at stories sometimes. You, however, managed to do it twice during the conclusion of this mission. Well done!
The one issue I have is that this story almost comes off more like a MST than a mission in places. The agents don't really do anything except snark at the badfi...il the ending: they don't really interact with each other or the environment except through dialogue. It feels a bit static to me.
Still, other than that, I loved it. Looking forward to your next one!
Auto-censoring put an ellipsis into the middle of my sentence. All you need to know is the word 'until' follows the word 'badfic.'
Auto-censoring jumps to silly conclusions like that.
I double checked with the preview message function. Space, no space, didn't matter. Silly little auto-censoring thing.
Are we supposed to be beta-ing, or just reading? And can I get a link to the fic?
Very very amused. Slightly sorry for Caleb, but I think it's probably not wise to offer sympathy to someone if you can't stop giggling that long. ^_^
I would also like some Bleeprin to erase the images of bacon shagging, thanks. {X D
~Neshomeh