It can be a difficult thing to make me laugh out loud at stories sometimes. You, however, managed to do it twice during the conclusion of this mission. Well done!

The one issue I have is that this story almost comes off more like a MST than a mission in places. The agents don't really do anything except snark at the badfi...il the ending: they don't really interact with each other or the environment except through dialogue. It feels a bit static to me.

Still, other than that, I loved it. Looking forward to your next one!

Are we supposed to be beta-ing, or just reading? And can I get a link to the fic?

Very very amused. Slightly sorry for Caleb, but I think it's probably not wise to offer sympathy to someone if you can't stop giggling that long. ^_^

I would also like some Bleeprin to erase the images of bacon shagging, thanks. {X D

~Neshomeh