Subject: Indeed.
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Posted on: 2011-05-01 05:17:00 UTC

I see your point on the starting the second story. For now, though, I'm not holding my breath that he actually will improve in writing style. The fact that his second story greatly tones it down on the pro-conservative subtext is honestly a step forward, but it's not a big enough improvement to cover all the other errors I mentioned before. Trust me, I do think the writing was genuinely bad, even before the hostilities began. So until he gets to those errors as well...

As for everything else... I'll curb sending stuff out of creator anger in the future.

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