Subject: Well done!
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Posted on: 2011-04-25 23:22:00 UTC

I really like this interlude. You've got a good balance of both humorous moments and more dramatic fare. The dialogue between Ilraen and Orken was interesting and well-constructed. I particularly enjoyed how neither side really held the moral high ground. It just goes to show the complications inherent in the PPC's ragtag-misfit-type organization.

There were admittedly times when I felt like you were force-feeding me canonical information, but those moments were relatively inoffensive and over very quickly. I look forward to your next mission/interlude with bated breath.

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