...nice mission! That badfic made me want to puke, and I don't even know Doctor Who!

-Aila

A few paragraphs into your mission:

"[A] purple briefcase appeared in the middle of the RC. There was a rattling of the clasps, and the briefcase opened itself to reveal a hole descending into a brightly-lit control room.

Perched at the top of the ladder was a young blonde woman with a set of pencils in her hair and a grin."

If the ladder was descending, shouldn't the blonde be at the bottom of the ladder?

Wonderful, Lily (you already know my opinions, I've been giving them to you throughout...)

What happened to the mini-Reapers? Did someone adopt them? You've only mentioned the mini-Aragog here.

~DF

But, to be fair, I did look at it and did not find any errors. So yeah.

Now, as for the mission. This was really, really good. Outside of killing an awful fic that simply hearing about made me sick, the massive amount of character development was handled very well. It was very smooth in the revelation of Christianne's past relationship, and the banter of the two Tile Lords was brilliant. May I say, I am a huge fan of the Disentangler. She is very funny, and wonderfully snarky.

Now, did I notice a reference to a Blackout story that I have not written yet? next thing you know GLaDOS is going to show up and try to take over the place or something. That was exactly what I was planning to do. Man, now I have to get on with writing the darn thing. Or pass it on to someone else.

Now, if I may, I would love to acquire the Amulet of Gryffindor. It may be a Horcrux, but I can still do something with it. Look at it probably.

I am looking forward to reading more missions from you, especially from the Time Lords. Their relationship is fascinating, and really fun to read.

I think DawnFire showed me a section of this you didn't cover, where they had a maaaaaagical~ circle and were doing a ritual and it didn't seem very Harry Potter-y.

Good to know it's been sporked.