Subject: Well done!
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Posted on: 2011-04-06 06:10:00 UTC
I'm currently following the Chuggaaconroy Let's Play of Okami, and I LOVE the game from what I've seen so far. Nice job with the mission!
Subject: Well done!
Author:
Posted on: 2011-04-06 06:10:00 UTC
I'm currently following the Chuggaaconroy Let's Play of Okami, and I LOVE the game from what I've seen so far. Nice job with the mission!
Aster and Lore try and restrain their disgust when they are sent after a half-dog teleporting, rainbow-eyed Ōkami Mary Sue, but thankfully they have backup from HQ.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eqMlWOiRRTGbzRbrRPCWzZ-Q4uYKvuc19YamH-Ea89U/edit?hl=en&authkey=CPXw3csF
I'm currently following the Chuggaaconroy Let's Play of Okami, and I LOVE the game from what I've seen so far. Nice job with the mission!
I liked the super plothole in this mission; it makes sense that such a major change to the canon's past, and the major ripple effect it would have on the game's outcome, would manifest as a major, violent plothole. It was a cool idea to have Lore actually dive into it in order to correct the Sue's changes.
One thing I was left wondering: you implied that Ray's small dog form was a disguise for the fic. Is Ray's normal form something other than human? I'm just curious, since Lore and Ray both became dogs.
I'm glad you gave this atrocity a good sporking. I love Ōkami, it's beautiful world, diverse characters and emotions... And Waka is my favorite character. He's sparkly, but in a good way. Unlike this tripe you have so wonderfully skewered.
You described the canon well at the start. Nice and simple.
I laughed at Waka's google-translated french, and I enjoyed watching Lore remove the "curse" on the Oina tribe. That was creative.
If I do get permission, I would like to spork an Okami fic of this caliber. You've inspired me. This cannot stand.
This is a pretty good mission. I don't know much about Okami, though...