Okay. I liked your characters - Meta seems like he would be fun to read, and the interaction of the serious nature of Biggins with his devil-may-care attitude looks interesting.

But honestly, I don't feel comfortable giving you permission at the moment; the syntax was off, and the story seemed to lack polish.

Don't take this as a once-and-for-all no, you're quite welcome to try again when you feel you've got a better handle on your spelling and grammar. In fact, if you can send me your e-mail, on the IRC or something, I'll go over it again and let you know what I spotted. I hope you continue to hang around and post, and best of luck working on writings in general!

The following paragraph,
If the face of a Daisy was capable of glaring then the Marquis was certainly managing it. I have a report from Doctor Fitzgerald that you 'found' a Remote Activator left behind in your home continuum by one of our newer agents, and with the assistance of a Canon character known as Forge you were able to active the device and transport yourself here. Have I missed anything?
is doubled, and contains a word choice error: 'you were able to activate the device'

It's a bit clumsily worded when the Marquis says he's left with 'a new requirement for agents.' A better choice may be 'I'm left with an opening for agents,' or 'I'm now shorthanded' or something to that effect.

And that's it. Very entertaining read.

I'm not a permission giver (I don't even have permission myself yet), but I like it so far! You might want to get it beta read, though; a few commas appear to be missing, there are a few other grammatical errors, and "If the face of a Daisy was capable of glaring then the Marquis was certainly managing it. I have a report from Doctor Fitzgerald that you 'found' a Remote Activator left behind in your home continuum by one of our newer agents, and with the assistance of a Canon character known as Forge you were able to active the device and transport yourself here. Have I missed anything?" was put twice.
Great job, otherwise!